Please tell me what you think of my book. I'm 13 and the plot is her mother is a vampire and she has to choose?

um, from what i read it was prettty good, but really, can't you come up with something more creative? i mean, vampires have been done to death! so maybe you can change it or something, make it your own sort of creature, not just some stupid fairy that sparkles and isn't man enough to bite his own girlfriend.